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Friday 4 March 2016

Drake and Josh's Adventure

    Drake & Josh’s adventure!
It was a beautiful sunny day in New Zealand and these 2 brothers named Drake & Josh watch T.V all day long. They didn’t care about how hot they were and they didn’t even bother to share with anyone. Drake & Josh are really selfish but they are really fit even though they watch t.v all day and eat. Drake & Josh aren’t close brothers so that’s when their mother decided to take them out somewhere so they can get along and so she can watch t.v. Drake & Josh’s mother took them canoeing because their not good at it and so they can be gone for a long time. Once they got in the canoe their mother ran away so they don’t have to come back home and take the t.v. Drake & Josh was struggling to paddle so they turned around to ask their mum if they can go back home but they just noticed that she left. Drake & Josh didn’t have a choice because they were staying inside the house for too long and they forgot how to get home so they got in the canoe and started paddling because it would have been a waste of time leaving.

Drake & Josh randomly jumped in a random canoe and didn’t notice there was a whole in it so they just keep paddling far far away and that’s when they finally noticed they were sinking. They couldn’t turn their canoe so they just keep paddling straight and saw to other canoes and headed straight to it. Drake & Josh were striking more and more but luckily they can swim so they swam to the other 2 canoes. The canoes they swam up to were empty so they just helped themselves and tried to turn the canoe to the way back to land. Drake & Josh were trying their best to paddle their canoes but they were too long so they just shared 1 canoe and they worked together as a team and the canoe was finally heading towards land. Finally Drake & Josh finally made it back home and they finally learned how to work together as a team and they decided to do stuff more together often and explore the world instead of exploring the T.V and exploring laziness.           THE END

1 comment:

  1. Great narrative Koula. I like the interesting vocab you've been able to use in your writing.

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