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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, 4 November 2016

Rewriting instructions

Task: This was my task for my literacy class. On the left hand side they are examples of clear, simple steps about instructions. But on the right side I just made a few changes to add in.
Pick up an egg, gently hit it against the side of a bowl and empty the contents into a clean bowl.
Pick up an egg and gently hit it on the side of the bowl, then empty out the contents into a bowl.
Open the fridge and take out the butter. Take off the lid. Get a knife and use it to scoop some butter. Rub the knife onto the toast.
Open the fridge and take out the butter, then you take off the lid and you get a knife to scoop out some butter. Then rub the knife onto the toast.
Hold the two shortest sides of paper and bend them together. Squeeze them so that the paper is now in half.
Hold two shortest side of the paper and bend them together, then fold it so that the paper is now in half.
When you hear the sound of the whistle, move one leg in front of the other as quickly as you can.
Once you hear the sound of the whistle, move your right leg in front of your left do it over and over and make it faster as you go.
When player One had rolled the dice, they should hand it to player Two, who should then roll it too. The person with the highest score moves their counter first.
After the first player rolls the dice they should hand it over to the second player to roll. How ever you keep playing the game until there is a winner which will be the person with the most points.
If you want to turn on the computer, look for the round, lack power button and press it once.
If you are wanting to turn on your computer, you look at the back of the device and look for the round button. You then press the button once and you wait for it to turn on.
Hold the handles of the scissors and cut along the dotted line, making sure you don’t hurt yourself.
Hold the handles of the scissors and cut through the dotted lines without cutting yourself.
Before you start mixing the ingredients, switch on the oven and turn the dial to 140 degrees.
Before you start mixing all the ingredients switch on the oven and turn the dial to 140 degrees.  
Take the lid off the glue stick and rub the glue on the tab, being careful not to get any glue on your clothes.
Take the lid off the glue stick and rub the glue on the tab, be careful and make sure you don’t get any glue on your clothes.
When you have planted your seed, pick up the pot and move it it near to a window where it will get lots of sunlight.
Once you have planted your seed, pick up the pot and take it near a window where it will get lots of sunshine.

Thursday, 25 August 2016

Sleeping Advice



This week in literacy we have been working on sleep. This presentation is like a letter sent to me from my partner asking me to give her sleeping advice.

Saturday, 20 August 2016

How Our Muscles Work

Do you know how our muscles work?
If you don’t know how our muscles work or you want to learn about them, then keep reading and you’ll find out.


Everyone has more than 600 muscles in our bodies Yes more than 600. Muscles are so important for us people because it gives us strength and power and without muscles we would probably be dead and we wouldn’t be able to move at all. We all have 3 types of muscles which are called Cardiac, Skeletal muscles & Smooth muscles.

The Cardiac muscles, skeletal muscles & the smooth muscles have really important jobs so keep reading and I will tell you what they do. The Cardiac muscle is so important because it is the muscle for our heart and which our heart keep us alive.  The thick muscles of our heart is purposed to pump blood out and then relax to let the blood back in after it has been circulated through the body. Skeletal muscles are just as important as the Cardiac muscle because this muscle controls what we do like for example without this muscle we wouldn’t be able to walk, move our head, exercise and a lot more.


Last but not least Smooth muscles. Smooth muscles are found in our stomach, intestines, uterus, bladder and blood vessels.  Smooth muscles work on their own without us being aware of it. If we have finished eating the Smooth muscles help by moving the food through the digestive tract.

Muscles are really important to us people because it helps us survive life so I encourage you to take care of your body so that you can be nice and healthy in the future and I hope you take care of your body more often after reading this.

Friday, 4 March 2016

Drake and Josh's Adventure

    Drake & Josh’s adventure!
It was a beautiful sunny day in New Zealand and these 2 brothers named Drake & Josh watch T.V all day long. They didn’t care about how hot they were and they didn’t even bother to share with anyone. Drake & Josh are really selfish but they are really fit even though they watch t.v all day and eat. Drake & Josh aren’t close brothers so that’s when their mother decided to take them out somewhere so they can get along and so she can watch t.v. Drake & Josh’s mother took them canoeing because their not good at it and so they can be gone for a long time. Once they got in the canoe their mother ran away so they don’t have to come back home and take the t.v. Drake & Josh was struggling to paddle so they turned around to ask their mum if they can go back home but they just noticed that she left. Drake & Josh didn’t have a choice because they were staying inside the house for too long and they forgot how to get home so they got in the canoe and started paddling because it would have been a waste of time leaving.

Drake & Josh randomly jumped in a random canoe and didn’t notice there was a whole in it so they just keep paddling far far away and that’s when they finally noticed they were sinking. They couldn’t turn their canoe so they just keep paddling straight and saw to other canoes and headed straight to it. Drake & Josh were striking more and more but luckily they can swim so they swam to the other 2 canoes. The canoes they swam up to were empty so they just helped themselves and tried to turn the canoe to the way back to land. Drake & Josh were trying their best to paddle their canoes but they were too long so they just shared 1 canoe and they worked together as a team and the canoe was finally heading towards land. Finally Drake & Josh finally made it back home and they finally learned how to work together as a team and they decided to do stuff more together often and explore the world instead of exploring the T.V and exploring laziness.           THE END

Recrafting story

Problem:
As I sat on the dock, I could feel something tugging on my line. Every now and then my line felt like it was attached to something really heavy under water so I tried my best to pull it out but that didn’t work. All of a sudden I pulled my line out water and I didn’t catch any fish. It was really mysterious because I thought I would of caught a fish but there was nothing on my hook. I decided to move to a new spot because I thought something really dangerous was about to attack me.

Solution:
But luckily for me as I was moving to a new spot I finally caught a huge massive fish. As I was killing the fish I left to go home so I could cook the fish to eat. But all of a sudden I was feeling kind of worried but I don’t know why so I went for a walk to the dock that I was on before to see if anyone was there.

Wednesday, 24 February 2016

Re-Crafting

Hello, this is my presentation about Re Crafting. This week Mrs Ilaoa's literacy class have been learning all about re-crafting. Re-Crafting means Re doing something to make it better and our literacy class had to re write a paragraph to make it more interesting and to make it better. We had to Re Craft so when the reader reads our story they can picture our words in their heads. 

Friday, 19 February 2016

Narrative Writing

Hello, This is my blog post about my Narrative Writing. On the very last slide is my story that I made up. If you don't know what a Narrative writing is just look at my presentation and you might learn something.

Thursday, 26 November 2015

Athletics

On the 13th of October it was athletics day for Pt England school. Pt England school had 4 different teams and they aren Hinemoana, Hokule’a, Te Aurere, and Hikianalia.

My favourite activity from athletics was the relays because my team worked really well together and we helped each other and cheered for each other as we went. The activity I found challenging was the sprints and the tagger war.I found tagger war hard easy in the first 2 rounds but when we versed Hikianalia and Te Aurere they were really hard to beat because they we strong and they worked together as a team to win.

Finally after all that running and doing the activities it was lunch time and we finally had some rest and had something to eat. As soon as the bell rang it was time to go back to have some more fun at athletics.It was time to do high jump and I really enjoyed high jump because all we did was have fun while jumping on the mat and enjoying athletics while we can.

When athletics was over I couldn’t stop thinking about how much fun everyone had. What I enjoyed about athletics was working as a team with the year 7 girls, participating in the activities, I also enjoy myself and I enjoyed having fun at athletics and I enjoy being a year 7.

Tuesday, 10 November 2015

A time when losing something.

First, at the beginning of the year I got my new uniform along with my new school hat. On the first day of school it was really sunny so I had to wear my hat if I wanted to play outside in the sun. A few weeks later I lost my hat and I tried to look for it but it was lost and I gave up looking for it.

The season went past and it was winter so I didn’t need my hat anymore. When I lost my hat I felt disappointed because my mum might waste her money on buying me a new hat.

It’s finally term 4 and it’s nearly summer. We had an Immersion Assembly and that is when the teachers mentioned bringing our hats back to school. I tried looking for my hat again at school and I finally found my hat it was in our green room. I found my hat in a big pile of clothes in the green room so now and am happy that I found my hat because now I can play out in the sun.

Now that I found my new hat I will try my best to look after it and try to find a safe place to put it.


Monday, 24 August 2015

Smart footprint

This is a Google Drawing that room 4 literacy class did with miss Kyla.What we have been learning with miss Kyla is public and private.On this Google drawing I wrote what I thought to me what was Public & Private.

Wednesday, 1 July 2015

Ronald Mac Donald

             Ronald Mac Donald

On July the 9th there was a little girl named Rosie who had a very special birthday turning 6 years old.She wanted a very special guest to come to her party which was Ronald Mac Donald.She was so happy that Ronald could make it to her party but the only thing she didn’t know about Ronald was that he likes cake so much that he steels cake.The little girl took lots of selfies with Ronald and it was finally time to light the candles and it was time for the little girl to make a wish.But out of no where Ronald started running to the girl and before she could even make a wish Ronald blew the candles and stole the cake.Ronald ran as fast as he can with the cake but he could not run that fast because of his clown outfit and it made him a bit slow to run.The girls parents called the cops and as soon as he got out of Mac Donald's the cops were there to arrest him.Before Ronald could even do anything he tipped the cake on his face and as soon as he had cake on his face he licked his hole face until it was clean.He got arrested from stealing the cake and the little girl told him if he wants to get out of jail he has to buy he has to buy the little girl cake for all her birthdays until she turns 21 years old. THE END

Monday, 29 June 2015

Brain Storm and my Plot Writing




For Mrs Moala's Literacy class we did a brainstorm of our story that we made up and a plot of our story.My story was about Ronald Mcdonald steeling cake at a girls birthday party.