Today in my literacy class we had to finish this brainstorm from yesterday. This brainstorm is about the journal my group read which is called the Journey. The Journey is about these people who were on a land and some of their family members got killed by the carved face warriors. They ended up escaping the land and ened up in a new and peaceful island.

George Puepuemai - Make kindness go viral

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Hello, Sorry for this late post. Reports are coming up and I have to post everything on my blog so my parents can see the good work I have been work. This post is about the assembly we had when George Puepuemai got presented to be a prefect. This blog post is all about George and his family and questions like how did George and his family encoured you to make kindness go viral and other stuff like that.

Johnny Angel Graphic Artist/Novelist

Inference

Hello, This week for literacy we have been doing inferences. In this presentation there is a story about a girl named amber who wanted a haircut just like Meg Ryans but the hair stylist didn't know how to do Ambers hair so Amber ended up with a really bad haircut for the summer.

Drake and Josh's Adventure

    Drake & Josh’s adventure!

It was a beautiful sunny day in New Zealand and these 2 brothers named Drake & Josh watch T.V all day long. They didn’t care about how hot they were and they didn’t even bother to share with anyone. Drake & Josh are really selfish but they are really fit even though they watch t.v all day and eat. Drake & Josh aren’t close brothers so that’s when their mother decided to take them out somewhere so they can get along and so she can watch t.v. Drake & Josh’s mother took them canoeing because their not good at it and so they can be gone for a long time. Once they got in the canoe their mother ran away so they don’t have to come back home and take the t.v. Drake & Josh was struggling to paddle so they turned around to ask their mum if they can go back home but they just noticed that she left. Drake & Josh didn’t have a choice because they were staying inside the house for too long and they forgot how to get home so they got in the canoe and started paddling because it would have been a waste of time leaving.

Drake & Josh randomly jumped in a random canoe and didn’t notice there was a whole in it so they just keep paddling far far away and that’s when they finally noticed they were sinking. They couldn’t turn their canoe so they just keep paddling straight and saw to other canoes and headed straight to it. Drake & Josh were striking more and more but luckily they can swim so they swam to the other 2 canoes. The canoes they swam up to were empty so they just helped themselves and tried to turn the canoe to the way back to land. Drake & Josh were trying their best to paddle their canoes but they were too long so they just shared 1 canoe and they worked together as a team and the canoe was finally heading towards land. Finally Drake & Josh finally made it back home and they finally learned how to work together as a team and they decided to do stuff more together often and explore the world instead of exploring the T.V and exploring laziness.           THE END

Recrafting story

Problem:

As I sat on the dock, I could feel something tugging on my line. Every now and then my line felt like it was attached to something really heavy under water so I tried my best to pull it out but that didn’t work. All of a sudden I pulled my line out water and I didn’t catch any fish. It was really mysterious because I thought I would of caught a fish but there was nothing on my hook. I decided to move to a new spot because I thought something really dangerous was about to attack me.

Solution:

But luckily for me as I was moving to a new spot I finally caught a huge massive fish. As I was killing the fish I left to go home so I could cook the fish to eat. But all of a sudden I was feeling kind of worried but I don’t know why so I went for a walk to the dock that I was on before to see if anyone was there.

Re-Crafting

Hello, this is my presentation about Re Crafting. This week Mrs Ilaoa's literacy class have been learning all about re-crafting. Re-Crafting means Re doing something to make it better and our literacy class had to re write a paragraph to make it more interesting and to make it better. We had to Re Craft so when the reader reads our story they can picture our words in their heads.